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[VG Exiles - Episode 2]

AWESOME

this is just unbelievable, i mean, so much fighting, Jon was cool too, i wanna do something like this now, I WANT!

[goku vs super mario bros]

well

I dont know, I didnt like it that much, here´s why.
1- If u r using flash, you could make transparency effects and shit like that, in the beams for example.
2- It´s not explained why they are fighting
3- Mario fighting like in DBZ is already done and just remembering that one (SMBZ) I can´t avoid to compare them, so this one looks bad compared to the other one and we see it as if its worse than what it is...idk if that was clear LOL
4- The Fighting wasn´t planed, they just tryed to hit the other, and that gets boring
5- I´m no DBZ fan, but Goku overpowers Mario, with just a blast he would desintegrate Mario, so it doesn´t make sense...
6- Why is Goku in Mushroom Kingdom?
Then, the explanation of why i did not put you a 1 or other thing is,
1- It´s pretty noticeable that you will get really good if you practice.
2- Although the fighting was bad planed, the fight almost didn´t show any bad allignement.
3- I don´t like the music but its pretty good for this, it fits kinda ok
4- I love Mario related content so I kinda like this although i dont like DBZ
5- You have pretty good camera skills which can be improved a little bit.Like shaking and shit, more, and zooming in more too
6- It´s not short so it doesn´t leave the viewer with anxiety of watching more, that´s good, i have a problem with that mainly since my flashes often go too big in size and then i dont know how to compress them....
Well... if you practice A LOT, and i really mean it, practice makes perfection, never forget that.... make some intros to your flashes, explain things before the action starts, it´s very likely that you will become a great sprites animator...
pretty long review lol

[Be Sprited]

Lolz

this is funny shit, excellent, awesome, and i personally fav the part when X gets smashed by the capsule, the DuDuL part

[Sonic the Flash Movie]

LOL

DUDE YOU ARE AWESOME!
I COULDNT STOP LAUGHIN OF THE SHIT, KEEP UP, DO NEVER LEAVE THIS SHIT PLEASE
and the details about sonic classic games were excellent

[Pencilmation #7]

Whoa

It´s amazing, the hand is an improvement, even the anim looks better now, then what? are you gonna do 3D pencilmations? i wouldnt be surprised since u r this good, do never leave this pls

[N. Zero vs O. Zero]

Good

It was good, not excellent though, in some parts the animation kinda doesnt look like it how it should, and well, if they are fighting, i really doubt they are gonna wait for the other to finish talkin, if u get the point, other than that it got me into it and i usually close them before they end, and its really cool to find interesting things here, if this thing was to practice its really good then, i dont even like those sprites and i liked them in here lol

SS4FlameAlchemist responds:

Well thanks. I appreciate the criticism. There actually wasn't supposed to be any talking once the fight started, but I lost motivation to do the animation to it's full potential. I do seem to have an issue making characters jump. I have been practicing. Well, I am going to reduce the talking next time, and the animation will look a lot better. But, thanks for the review.

[goku vs adult gohan]

whoa

just awesome, i dont even like dbz but i like this

[Beat up Sandbag]

awesome

my favourites were yours btw

[Smash Kingdom Melee]

whoa

i was laughing of the random shit until alvin´s work came, then it appeared to be a badass fight, awesome

[MK vs. SF 2]

damn

one of the best sprites movies i have seen in my life